Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Poems

Medici Poem:
The Medici were very great
Some people decided to hate
They liked to bait
Great artists to come and paint
They would show of their awesome work
Then they would lurk
They would lurk for another artist





Art Poem:
In the Renaissance
People liked to dance
When people would dance
They would be wearing pants
Although in they paintings they drew
They were often nude
The great painters are the Ninja Turtles
But they had hurtles
Avoiding the church
They would search
You couldn't hide on a perch








11 comments:

  1. Although the poems were good, the details were a little shakey.

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  2. Although the Medici poem is good, I love the Artists peom. The favts are woven in in a funny way.

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  4. When you said "they would be wearing pants," that was my favorite part.

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  5. Although these poems are short, they are funny and good.

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  6. Two poem,
    both with a hook,
    my eyes don't cease to roam,
    I wish to look.

    Although the Art Poem is nice, I love your Medici one, it's nice to see rhyming one in a while, while being good and making sense too!

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  7. When people rhyme in their poems, it is nice to hear.

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  8. I really like these poem, but if they were longer they could be better.

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  9. Although they are short, they are funny too.

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  10. The poems are shorts, but at least they aren't pants. (HA! HA! Get it!?!?)

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  11. Although the poems are funny, they have real facts.

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