MEDICI POEM:
Medici Patrons
Patronized super artists
They gained lots power
LEONARDO DA VINCI POEM:
Leo was artist
Created Mona Lisa
He was a genius
GALILEO GALILEI POEM:
Smart Galileo
World revolves around the sun
That was his idea
MICHELANGELO POEM:
Michelangelo
Forced to paint the ceiling of
The Sistine Chapel
BRUNELLESCHI POEM:
Brunelleschi makes
A great big enormous dome
Staple of Florence
A great big enormous dome
Staple of Florence
When you talked about all the geniuses, you do it in a wonderful way by writing a poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of poems here, yet they are all vary good.
ReplyDeleteYou made haiku's that were highlights of the leading figures, so your poems were really good.
ReplyDeleteAlthough you wrote great haiku's, it seems like you were just trying to jumble a bunch of good things together to make it better. Try just writing a single poem.
ReplyDeleteIt can be hard to say much in a Haiku, but when you write several, it seems easier.
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