Friday, March 4, 2011

M11

              Today I am going to help out my broski and he wants to overthrow the Patricians. I decide to join the Plebeian rebellion.  Since I know I can't take on the Patricians as a small kid, before I go to bed I pray to Mars (the roman god of war) that I would be invincible. The night I prayed, I had a dream or was it a dream... whatever it was, I saw this dude who is probably Mars telling me I need to make the Plebeians join up with the slaves, but what I really wanted to hear was how to be invincible and as soon as I thought about it the voice said you need to fight a whale with a lot of blubber, and as the fat rolls with your blood you will become strong and the power of Mars will make you invincible.

                I woke up and tried to coax Maximus, my broski, into going with me but he said no.  After he said no I told him that if he didn't go I wouldn't tell him how to overthrow the Patricians. After I told him how to overthrow the Patricians, he came with me. When we got there I killed the whale because it was out of water and couldn't move. It was really easy to kill it.
                 When I got back I told them that they needed to join the slaves. With me being invincible and the Plebeians and the slaves working together. The Plebeians/slaves/me won so they made it, everyone was equal and everyone lived happily ever after. Except the Patricians, they were mad.

3 comments:

  1. Nice post, I like the way you wrote it. It has good descriptions and and good ws sentence.

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  2. I like how the whale didn't have any water so it was really easy to kll. I also like how you prayed to Mars.

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  3. You use 3 Afters (an AAAWWUBBIS) in a row, and you don't use a single comma with them!

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