Today I am going to help out my broski and he wants to overthrow the Patricians. I decide to join the Plebeian rebellion. Since I know I can't take on the Patricians as a small kid, before I go to bed I pray to Mars (the roman god of war) that I would be invincible. The night I prayed, I had a dream or was it a dream... whatever it was, I saw this dude who is probably Mars telling me I need to make the Plebeians join up with the slaves, but what I really wanted to hear was how to be invincible and as soon as I thought about it the voice said you need to fight a whale with a lot of blubber, and as the fat rolls with your blood you will become strong and the power of Mars will make you invincible.
I woke up and tried to coax Maximus, my broski, into going with me but he said no. After he said no I told him that if he didn't go I wouldn't tell him how to overthrow the Patricians. After I told him how to overthrow the Patricians, he came with me. When we got there I killed the whale because it was out of water and couldn't move. It was really easy to kill it.
When I got back I told them that they needed to join the slaves. With me being invincible and the Plebeians and the slaves working together. The Plebeians/slaves/me won so they made it, everyone was equal and everyone lived happily ever after. Except the Patricians, they were mad.
Nice post, I like the way you wrote it. It has good descriptions and and good ws sentence.
ReplyDeleteI like how the whale didn't have any water so it was really easy to kll. I also like how you prayed to Mars.
ReplyDeleteYou use 3 Afters (an AAAWWUBBIS) in a row, and you don't use a single comma with them!
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