Friday, November 12, 2010

M3

                  When I got back and showed I had found an agent. Well they were grateful that I found an agent but I wasn't done with my mission. So I had to go back to Egypt. When I got there I started looking for monuments so I set sight for the Great Pyramid of Giza. When I got to the area of the pyramid. I looked around and couldn't see a pyramid a mile away. So I went to where the pharaoh would rule and learnt that Khufu (the builder of the pyramid) wasn't even born yet. So I had to take out my notebook to travel to the RIGHT period of time.
                 So when I got to the right time I see that they are building the pyramid and while I was looking at the great monument in progress. King Khufu popped out at me and I was paralyzed with fear. While I stood there looking like a dead fish. King Khufu was yelling at me for not working and taking a break when not given one. So I told him I was a new recruit.Yelling Loudly, one of the government officials came and told the king that I was a bad juju.   When the official told him that I was bad juju  the King erupted in rage. Then he turned to me he looked like he was going to kill me so I did some quick thinking and I told him that the official was just covering up his own tracks that he was the one with bad juju. Then he believed me so then the King told me I was invited to a ceremony to honor me being a god. After the feast I told the king I had to go but he insisted that I stay... so I did.
                         

5 comments:

  1. I really like your post. I liked how you portrayed the Pharaoh as a man quick to his temper as well as heartiness.
    -Lizzie

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  2. I like your word choice, I especialy like the word juju.

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  3. I like it.its making me have the shivers

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  4. To be honest, you are a little bad juju.

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