Friday, October 22, 2010

M1

I awoke this morning feeling very groggy, then I went downstairs to eat breakfast and right before my eyes I see my whole family. Aunt Abby, Aunt Addie, Uncle Bill, and Uncle Mo was allowed to come out of rehab just to come say goodbye, and all of my friends.After all of the ruckus I went outside to get some air. She sat there, on the bench, knowing she would be without me for a long time. So seeing that she needed some time alone i went back inside and then all of the people there gave me gifts. The Aunts all got me books lame but don't tell my aunts. Then my uncles were up Uncle Mo gave me a Bibi Gun and Uncle Bill gave me an ipod. They were so cool they were the best gifts. Then my best friend Max gave me the ultimate prank book it was tight the rest of my friends gave me the same sort of thing. Then before I could say thank you to all my friends Uncle Bill says " Bon Appetite " and we had cake. My mom was still outside and when she came back inside just a half a second before the men that came to get me. She froze. Then she started to fall but the guy who came to get me caught her. Then she asked if it was my dad (my dad left me and my mom but I don't like to talk about it). Then he told us that his name was fetcher. So after we were done calming down my mom I said my goodbyes we went to the car but right before I got in Susy from down the street came running down towards us and she said out of breath that she had a gift for me and I replied "Where is it" and she said right here and she gave me a kiss and then we got in the car and I couldn't keep my mouth closed for a long time.

6 comments:

  1. I love the way you used the writers secret

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  2. I used groggy the same way, with the waking up thing. It's funny how you described being paralized when Susy gave you a kiss.

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  3. I like your post because you listed all your friends and family. I think your post is the best.

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  5. Austin you have created this image of a evil smile with a bibi gun and a prank book, wow not a good combination. Great post and great use of the writer's secrets.

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  6. I'm glad they let your uncle out of rehab to say goodbye.

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